Six Sentence Sunday — "Erin" #SixSunday
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This teaser comes from a short story I wrote during NaNo for the “Succubus Wiki”. The Wiki will be an anthology of short stories featuring a variety of succubi from all different worlds and genres. Kind of an erotic sampler. This six is taken from Erin’s story.
Erin is a lab-created succubus who has just been awakened from her metamorphosis. She’s a little shaky in her motor movements and speech, but is rapidly regaining her senses.
Immediately prior to this six, Erin has nearly killed by accident an orderly she calls White Coat. Dr. O’Neal, the scientist who oversaw her creation, is speaking, explaining to Erin the rules of her kind:
“But they may not take too kindly to what you did to poor Lenny on the floor here.”
I glance down at White Coat. “I do not care about him. He hurt me.”
“Yeah, but you aren’t supposed to disobey males; that’s one of the most fundamental ERIN rules. If they find out, you’ll be euthanized.”
Not supposed to disobey males?! Euthanized!? WTF?!
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Eep! That’s a tad harsh, don’t you think?
Very harsh indeed, but Erin is different and has a few tricks up her sleeve.
Oh, no! I wouldn’t do well with ERIN rules! LOL! Can’t wait to read this one, Lila. Sensational six! Love the original Stepford Wives pic. 🙂
It’s even more galling than what the six alludes to but our Erin isn’t your typical dystopian pleasure-bot (LOL).This particular story has been screaming lately to be expanded and I may heed her call.
Nifty concept here. 🙂 Love it.
Thanks, Rebecca!
That’s an interesting premise and these six have me rooting for Erin. Euthanised because she defended herself? I could punch that doctor!
You can’t tell from this snippet here, but the doctor is one of the good guys…but shhhhh. thanks.
Yikes! That sounds like a pretty harsh world.
Very harsh when they “manufacture” disposable humans. It’s wartime and they also “manufacture” soldiers.
UGH! I think I like her, she didn’t obey! 😉
heh-heh…yeah Erin 1118 has a mind of her own, that’s for sure.
hehehe, the “poor Lenny” remark made me giggle, and the “if they find out” remark has me curious about a potential future coverup? I’m definitely intrigued. Nice work! 🙂
Heh-heh, Lenny is a name that cries out to be coupled with “poor” doesn’t it? Yes, you got it right–there is a coverup afoot as part of a larger mission. Thanks.
Great six! I’m echoing but yes way harsh!
Aww, just a little human euthanasia…done in a humane way… Shudder…yeah, way, way harsh.
I’m interested to know the other ERIN rules. This story screams to be published Lila. Great six!
Thanks, Ryan. I may expand this one…dunno yet.